Hi Giova, Good timing on the shake, but many, many problems.
#1: You were shootting up the bird's butt; in other words, you needed to be well to your right to parallel the subject.
#2:Both the foreground grasses and the background are distracting.
#3: The reds and yellows are over saturated
#4: You have cut off the virtual feet.
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