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Lovely fine details ab=nd good textures in the fur. I would give a bit more room on the right and less on the left. Have the whole bird in the image and less of the dark rock in the top RHC. Lovely action. A dream for me to photograph Bears chasing Salmon....
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Than you both for your comments.
The touch on the curves has helped a lot Rachel - I shall play around and see I can replicate it.
The framing was a bit tight and I did think about extending the canvas to give a bit more room so will give that a shot as well.
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First look I thought it needed just a little extra in the blacks - maybe not quite as much as Rachel, but somewhere in between.
I like the jumping pose, but I think the killer frame would have been just a bit earlier as he was coming a bit more towards you - do you have any earlier frames from this sequence?
As already mentioned, the best framing would have had him a bit further to the left, but easier said than done in a fast reaction setting in the field.
Mike
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Hi Mike -- very nice image and good timing on freezing the moment ! I too agree with the above suggestions especially regarding the framing . Rachel's RP certainly lifts the image . Hope to see you posting more .
TFS !