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    Default Short Eared Owl on a Branch

    There are some branches around this guy, but overall I think it's OK as the light is decent - just wondering if the branches bother you, or if they are OK as part of the environment the owl was in. Shorties seem to prefer the ground so I was just happy to have him in a tree momentarily. The light is harsh on the eye; I think they are OK, but I was working on the right eye a bit to make it match as much as possible the left. Thanks.

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    Hi Paul,
    what a gorgeous subject, you got him in sweet light with a perfect HA and a nice BG. A couple of issues, overall the perch is a bit busy, especially the twigs that have crossed the owl. The BG is a bot noisy (don't sharpen the BG) and the image has a green color cast.

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    Thanks for the tips...here it is with some tweeks. Not much I can do about the twigs unfortunately.

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    Good bird, in lovely light and with a great pose. The repost helps the bg. I don't mind the twigs. I could imagine cropping some off the right to get closer to a vertical 3:2 format.

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    Sweet bird in nice light. Repost is much better. I think you could clone out that one stick in front of the bird fairly easily if you wanted to.

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    Paul, Nice shot but it seems to be on the warm side and the highlights on the eyes are a bit strange.
    Super pose though.

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    Despite the busy bush, I do not know many people who would not have taken the image! Great light, but just add a bit of reds to the overall color balance - that should help. Repost does address the noise very well.

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    Nice subject is right. The light is perfect and I like the direct stare. I agree with the suggested tweaks and the grainy BG looks much better.
    You mentioned "not much I can do about the twigs" but with a little practice, there is.
    I removed a few of the most bothersome twigs with the clone tool in PS and I also worked on the left eye. Looks like you tried to rebuild it?
    I adjusted the catch lights and cooled down the overall scene.
    I also cropped for more of a 2x3 as Bill suggested. Overall a great image. Hope you don't mind me adjusting your image.
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    What a tremendous transformation, quite an image!

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    Dave's repost hits all the marks
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