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    nikon d 300
    200-400 mm
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    This is a lovely image of the bear with grass in its mouth. I wish you had composed it with more space in the direction where the bear is looking, but no deal breaker. TFS.

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    I'm sure you meant brown bear (Ursus arctos middendorfi). Great light and a fine looking bear.. I would have liked to have seen the right side cropped off.. Dead space without much visual interest. I hope you don't mind I cropped and re posted. In the re-pst the bear is looking into the composition not out of. If I would have had more room I would have placed bears head on upper left power point. Now if another interesting element could have been included on the right side of the OP it may have worked better.
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    good job

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    Hi Stuart -- Lovely specimen and that grass in its mouth is an absolute bonus. I agree with the above comments regarding the composition , Dale's RP has taken it up by some distance. I also feel it lacks some sharpness , that could be an easy fix though . Lovely image .

    TFS !

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    Stuart, I agree with the others regarding composition - the main issue I have is that the bear does not look sharp, particularly the head/face?
    Please do add your own critiques and comments on the photos of others...
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