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Hi Michael
Yes, agreed, would be nice to get a reflection in that lake.. Not much chance with that vegie crop. Nice composition and placement of arc. I would lighten the FG just a little and the blues (clouds..) & greens(vegies) are a bit strong in saturation I think
Don
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Originally Posted by
Don Railton
Hi Michael
Yes, agreed, would be nice to get a reflection in that lake.. Not much chance with that vegie crop. Nice composition and placement of arc. I would lighten the FG just a little and the blues (clouds..) & greens(vegies) are a bit strong in saturation I think
Don
Wow, I didn't notice the blues at all, until I read your reply and looked again, and they really stuck out like a sore thumb! nice catch!
~MT
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Nicely done to get the big lightning strike.
I think overall you could sharpen a bit more and add structure in the clouds through midtone contrast.
I agree that the foreground could get a little more details teased out...
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Hi Michael - Nice lightning. Good suggestions above that you have implemented well in the rp. I think I would go with the darker fg though. The additional detail isn't doing anything for me, if anything the now more visible plants are drawing the eye slightly.
TFS,
Rachel
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Nice timing, the repost clears up some of the suggestions. Love the mood and feeling here.
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Nice repost I would crop out the vegetation
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Repost worls best for me and I agree with cropping out the vegetation...repost shows an improvement in the clouds, but would like to see them a little sharper...great lightning strike!
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