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    This is the last one from this trip to Serra da Estrela here in Portugal. The place where this was made is Vale Glaciar do Zezere (Glaciers Valley) in the heart of the Mountain.

    I processed it in BW, used luminosity masks and basically this is it. What are your thoughts?

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    Hi Luis, The sky is ok for me but the land looks too dark, and with too much contrast, especially at the bottom... For me, the leading lines generated by the stream almost does not work as a result..

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    Hi Luis, love the drama here. I don't mind the contrast but I am wondering if you still have some room at the bottom. The stream is kinda placed a little bit too low on the frame for me. But of course it's a matter of preference.

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    Thanks for the feedback Don and Adhika, i`m not fully convinced with this picture at the moment and will review it.

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    HI Luis, I agree with Don the details in the land are lost especially in the bottom of the frame I had to look twice to make out the stream
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    Hi Luis - I agree with Don and Don. I also think you could bring out more detail in the clouds. It looks like it is worth another look and processing again.

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    Hi Luis, I agree with the others that another round at processing the original RAW file would help to lift some more details out of the scene...look forward to a repost!

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