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Hi Artie, light to kill for and for 'US' across the pond, a nice low ISO too.
I really like the soft, muted warm colours of the habitat juxtapose to the more richer, bolder colours of the subject, a nice contrast. The shadow adds to the composition, but if it was me, then I would consider removing the grass across the sand/shadow because everything else is so clean and certainly an easy fix in PSCC. I was unsure about the grasses entering the frame on the RHS, but without it I think the image would appear to 'sterile'.
The horizontal line in the FG to me was a nice aid and with the 1DX MK2 easy to ensure things are level, I must admit that is a nice feature I personally like, but not required in BIF
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Steve
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Thanks Steve, I addressed that piece of grass in the blog post :)
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ps: easy to level with the in-viewfinder level as long as you are not so excited that you forget to look at it in the heat of the action...
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Superb light indeed and a very pleasing image in terms of composition. For a moment there I too wondered about the grasses on the RHS but soon realised they add some nice depth to the frame.
Lovely detail, colours (love the bright reds), wonderful pose from the Tern.
I am so taken with that pink light and the gentle warmth it brings about...What lovely mood!
The more I look, the more I like it Artie
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Many thanks for your kind words GP :)
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I addressed that piece of grass in the blog post
No problem Artie, haven't seen the Blog for several days, time has been of a 'premium' at present, but nice to know our thoughts are in tune on this one.
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Artie:
Good pose, soft light, excellent subject isolation. Agree about removing the grass across the shadow. The flow for my eyes through the image went from the bird, to the shadow, to the grasses on left, and only at end did I "see" the grasses on far right. I could go either way with them. There is enough depth for me in the image without them, but a matter of personal taste.
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You probably already know I love the grasses b/c they help to frame your image, as does the vegetation behind the bird. The light here is sublime.
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Hi Artie, lovely pink soft light. I was first wondering why the + 1 1/3 EV, but then realized that you must have exposed for the black and the soft light really helped in this case. I like the frame as is. The tree on the left and the grasses on the right helped frame the subject. I don't mind the grass across the shadow. I normally would lie a lower POV, but Had no idea what the BG would have been. TFS. Loi
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Very special light with a nice complimentary shadow accenting the time of day. Like the grasses
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Originally Posted by
Loi Nguyen
Hi Artie, lovely pink soft light. I was first wondering why the + 1 1/3 EV, but then realized that you must have exposed for the black and the soft light really helped in this case. I like the frame as is. The tree on the left and the grasses on the right helped frame the subject. I don't mind the grass across the shadow. I normally would lie a lower POV, but Had no idea what the BG would have been. TFS. Loi
Thanks Loi. Getting on the ground would have created a merge of the bird with the beach vegetation (no trees on the beach!)
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That's why I get up early, the killer light. It makes all the difference! Love the pose and the shadow and the framing of the reeds. Well done Artie
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