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Hi Ritesh,
A beautiful bird.
Unfortunately the head has a bit of motion blur. The bird is also just slightly past you and angling away from you ever so slightly.
What was your SS and what did you do to the BG? In what way did you modify it?
Gail
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Originally Posted by
gail bisson
Hi Ritesh,
A beautiful bird.
Unfortunately the head has a bit of motion blur. The bird is also just slightly past you and angling away from you ever so slightly.
What was your SS and what did you do to the BG? In what way did you modify it?
Gail
Yes agree to you the bird going little away from me to its favourite Pearce.... The SS is 1/1600 I think not sure and right now I don't have file with me its on my office iMac, but I will post it tomorrow.
Yes the In the BG there is big black branch exactly behind the bird and its in focus to the end of the branch ..... I fully clone it out. That is the modification I did in this image.
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Colors are very nice in this image. I like the pose with the insect in its mouth and being able to see the feet, but I do agree with Gail's comments. Excellent job of cloning out the branch.
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I am sure a very difficult shot to obtain but I sense the eye is just not quite in focus, with a subject like this I would have gone for 1/3200 sec whenever practicable. I would also consider de-saturating the background and maybe a tad less bright.
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Great suggestions from all the members. I like the frame and the insect in the mouth really adds to the image. This is one where you could selectively sharpen the head only and give it a little bit more detail. Nice work on the cloning 2
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