Something different Dan! I quite like it. I like to see the boundaries pushed a little. This is very artful and interesting, and I could see this as a large print. I might consider a bit more canvas on the LHS?
I like what you were going for but I feel it missed the mark. I am always thrilled to see our photographers here changing it up and thinking outside the box as you were doing here. I wish I could pinpoint what exactly isn't working for me, but since I am not normally a blur photographer, I am not sure. Maybe it would have been better had all the birds been separated. Please don't stop changing it up.