I like this. The comp and placement of the bird in the frame is very nice.
A crop from the bottom to the first f in your name might be an option as well
Nice preening pose.
I am of 2 minds about the grass intersecting the perch. I am OK with it but could see a version with the grass cloned out.
I would also smooth out or tone down the white circular area in the BG just in front of the bird's head.
I would sharpen the bird a little bit more ( but maybe it is my eyes today (I was on call last night!)
Gail