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    I captured this image along Black Point Wildlife Drive in Merritt Island NWR, Merritt Island, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

    Nikon D7000
    Nikon 70-300mm F/4.5-5.6 VR AF-S ED shot at 300mm (450mm FFE)
    1/1250 F/8 Matrix Metering -1 EV ISO 220 AWB
    Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
    Cropped for composition and presentation
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    This is a very nice frame Joe, I like the placement of the Egret in the circles. Arguably a touch more at the top might be nice, but a pleasing tranquil shot.

    nice work.

    Mike

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    Hi Joe, I like how the edges of the ripples are just touching the edges of the frame. I would take a tiny bit off the bottom, and add to the top. Can you pull any more detail from the whites?

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    Circular ripples are superb. Reflection all in which I like asa opposed to chopping.. Ripples dictate the comp so can,t suggest much change.
    Nice image
    JohnR

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    nice image,like the water ripples,agree bit more room at the top.TFS.

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    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. Very much appreciated...
    Joe Przybyla

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