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    Last year one of the times I was leaving Gatorland after shooting at the rookery, I walked past a pool with Flamingos. I could not pass up a chance to give them a go. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    I love the curvature of the neck. I think the color is sublime. If I have to nitpick, the eye is not ideal. It's so weird to see such a small pupil. But it is what it is. Great shot!


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    Joe:

    Agree, the curves of the neck, bill and even the shoulder/back are great. Obviously very bright light, hence the tiny pupil.

    I might give it just a sliver more space, top, bottom and left, but a very minor point.

    I did run a 60% multiply layer on a luminosity mask of the highlights, and felt it made the colors even richer and toned down the brighter areas just a bit. Something to consider.

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    Hi Joe, very striking and I like the 'S' shape curve of the head/neck, even with the over lapping bill on the neck. I might look to having the same dark, rather patchy colour as the whole BKG and to eliminate the brighter green at the foot, plus running a Luminosity mask on the lighter area of the plumage on the RHS, neck and head. Running it on the head & beak on the lighter areas brings a bit more definition & form.

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    Randy I don't think we could have written a reply in such a 'tandem' manner, even if we were sitting side by side.

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    Steve:

    Pretty funny indeed! As they say, Great minds think alike! I am not sure how that explains us, but it is at least a pleasant thought.
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    I'm very pleased to be in your company Randy.

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    Adhika, Randy, and Steve... thank you for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. Very much appreciated...

    Randy and Steve, above is what I came up with using your suggestions and editing in Lightroom. WDYT?
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    Hi Joe, that I think is going along the lines of what I had in mind and perhaps Randy too, but I'm sure he will reply on his thoughts later. Personally, I think if you had sampled the dark green and used that in parts i.e. towards the foot and retained the 'patchy' looking feel, it may have softened the BKG as the black I find a bit too severe???? Also, don't forget the nostril 'vent', it's still green .

    If you used a % Luminosity then I might have gone stronger on the white part of the beak and the lighter area of the wing just for more detail/definition.

    Joe, it's just my take, however do you think it has improved the image, if you are happy, that is what matters.

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    As practice makes perfect and every image is a work in progress, I went back to the original and worked again on this image. There is much I like better. The bill is more defined, not getting lost in the black background. I think the color is more rich and the exposure better on the bird. I struggle with the color of the bird because I have not seen many to be able to say that's the color it should be. Above is the do over...
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    A nice capture. I prefer the OP where the bare parts are less greyed out and the colours less intense albeit in need of a very slight tweak.

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    Excellent portrait. Wonderful colours and superb details.

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    Both reposts work better than the OP. Photographing this bird in early morning or evening would make all of the difference, and I just love the curves.
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