Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: From the cave

  1. #1
    Alberto Oria
    Guest

    Default From the cave

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    This one is also from Vizcaya gardens. No pp, the exif is intact.
    Thank you very much for taking the time to see my pictures and helping me to improve my technique.:)


    Pentax K10d kit lens da 18-55 1:3.5-5.6 Iso 640 1/1250 f=7.1
    Last edited by Alberto Oria; 06-08-2008 at 07:57 AM.

  2. #2
    Oscar Zangroniz
    Guest

    Default

    Excellent shot Albert, love the composition on this one. Excellent dof, only wish that the rocks to your right would have been a little lighter like the ones to your left. But a very nice compose shot.
    Congrats and keep them coming.
    Regards,

  3. #3
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Boynton Beach, Florida
    Posts
    7,726
    Threads
    640
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    fantastic alberto!! especially with no PP!!! might would suggest that you could have gotten just a little lower to get the two monuments? on the left side of the far wall from touching the frame of the cave. hard to expose the right side of the cave without doing multiple exposures and layering them. maybe could get some detail in PP though. doesnt look bad to me. i like it!! well seen and well done!!!

  4. #4
    Gus Cobos
    Guest

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Hi Alberto,
    Nice composition and framing between the coral arch... The inside of your arch is a bit dark..I did some modifications to your image...:) I cropped just a tad from both sides of the frame to equal the bottom portion of your gateway. I lightened you arch, gave you just a slight touch of contrast, kicked up your saturation just one notch and sprinkled a little bit of sharpening...see if you like this...:cool:

  5. #5
    Alfred Forns
    Guest

    Default

    Love this image The framing is just perfect with just a little more room at top for space in the rock.

    I do like the lightening for shadow detail that Gus posted but would like the image darker. Would like to preserve some of the feed from the original. Same overall density with a hint of detail in the frame !!! Love it !!!!

  6. #6
    Lance Peters
    Guest

    Default

    Well done - love it . Agree with the comments about a bit more detail in the rocks on the right hand side.

    :)

    lance

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics