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    I captured this image at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
    Cropped for composition and presentation
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    Between your wood stork and this, you are on a portrait roll. I love the details and the patterns, and of course that blue eye. I think that you could crop about an inch off the bottom and have an even stronger presentation .

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    Joe:

    Agree about the crop, just to below the strong line of small feathers. The lines are nice, tilted head, of course that magical eye

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    It is a very nice portrait, love the shape and details and the colors. Nice as it is, but with the cropping suggestion it would even be a stronger image. TFS.

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    Excellent portrait shot, Joe. I tend to agree with the cropping suggestion.

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    You are nailing these portraits Joe.
    Perfect HA and love the feather scalloping.
    Very nice and agree with Grace re:crop,
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    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. I have changed the crop to reflect the suggestion, very much appreciated.
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