
Originally Posted by
arash_hazeghi
Hi Gail,
Technically this image is great, nice light sharp details perhaps a bit lower angle would have been better. I also love the trail of water kind of like tier marks on a race track!
But there is one issue that holds it back IMO and that is the fact that it is obviously a baited situation with the bait Photoshop'ed out. Looking at the first image, the viewer keeps wondering what the eagle is diving for and what he is looking at and then immediately it becomes apparent that the bait was there and has been removed. It looks too artificial and for that purpose it doesn't work for me personally. don't get me wrong I don't have anything against responsible baiting or other attraction methods used in the field but it needs to be a bit more discrete. For example if you have the eagle taking off from the water with a nice splash where the chicken bit is not visible it's a lot better IMO.
This is a common issue with baited eagle shots, even when the bait is a whole dead fish it floats on the water and it's clear that's not a wild catch. I think the more successful dynamic frames are those that don't hint at the bait.
Keep up the good work