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    Hi Giovanni, where is this taken, if I may ask.

    The ice in the FG is for my taste a bit to sharp. At the mountain rim you have a tad halo. Comp wise looks fine to me.
    The light is great.

    Have a great weekend

    Ciao Anette

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anette Mossbacher View Post
    Hi Giovanni, where is this taken, if I may ask.

    The ice in the FG is for my taste a bit to sharp. At the mountain rim you have a tad halo. Comp wise looks fine to me.
    The light is great.

    Have a great weekend

    Ciao Anette
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    Nice composition and good light. You may be able to tease a little more information out of the darkest shadow areas as the complete blackness tends to stop the eye. I like the light and colour in the clouds.

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    HI Giovanni, I like the comp and use of the foreground elements to draw the viewers eye into the frame. I am ok with the darks and would only try to lighten them if you could do it without adding any noise to them. I find the foreground a little crunchy and would back of the sharpening a tad.
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    Beautiful color, Giovanni! It might just be a personal preference but I agree with the assessment that the image is a tad over sharpened. There is also a sensor dust spot that you could clone out in the clouds.

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    Very nicely composed Giovanni and some good suggestions given to tweak the scene such as backing off on the sharpening a bit.

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