Hello guys, this is my first post I took this one today at Vizcaya, I like it.
Please I would appreciate some feedback. The image now shows Al's recommendations.
I am not familiar with forums etiquette, It is acceptable to perform changes on a post?
Last edited by Alberto Oria; 06-06-2008 at 11:41 PM.
I like it. Good composition filling the frame and well balanced, good exposure and careful placing of elements within the image. My main suggestion if for including the bottom flower at the base of the trees entirely and showing the right tree entirely. Normally if we want to show something we include it all. Would be fine to cut on purpose. Example cut the tree on the right some more then do the same to the left.
Within this image you can also isolate elements like the stairs etc. Looking good and forward to many more !!!!
hi alberto!! welcome to BPN!!! nice first post. it is acceptable for you to leave your original and then repost a revised copy of the original in another post down below!! you dont have to change it out. love what i see. looking forward to more!!
Hey Alberto, nice work. I like the overall scene showing such a lovely and historic location. Next time your in a situation like this where symmetry is so important, I'd take great care to line up directly in the middle of the scene...I think a step or two to the right would have put you dead-center and helped to improve the balance a bit. See you around!
Alberto, A big welcome to BPN. I remember this shot very well. Agree with Judd regarding the positioning of your shot. Excellent colors and contrast.
Regards.
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