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I really like it the image has a nice flow to the composition and the clouds at a sense of movement and time.
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Hi Morkel..
Glad to see you out of your comfort zone..
I have a different view to Don L, as I prefer this without the cloud and would have cropped this just below the bright cloud if it were mine. The buildings for me provide enough detail to maintain interest, I feel the cloud is a distraction. I do think you shot a little late however (and maybe you had no choice..) as the black FG would have had more detail if shot earlier.. But do I like it , yes, most definately...
DON
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Hi Morkel - It can be fun shooting the lights of a city and I don't do enough of it given that I live in one of the most recognizable skylines in the world. Now that it gets darker earlier maybe I'll experiment a bit. I find myself wanting a bit more at the bottom of the frame but not sure what was there. Also I find the movement/blur of the tops of the clouds distracting and would crop to just below the brightest area of the clouds.
TFS,
Rachel
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Excellent Morkel, a terrific cityscape.
Captures the energy and action....
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Hi Morkel...a prefect city scape and the clouds add an interesting element to the night scene...my only complaint is that it is making me claustrophobic
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Looks good to me, perspective is well controlled with he wide angle of view. The buildings at the edges lean slightly outward but its barely noticeble. Overall a very vibrant scene.
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Nice Work. The clouds are OK for me, I think they add extra interest. Interested to see that you didn't use the full 24mm, you may have been able to add a little more to the bottom of the image. Exposure well handled.
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Thanks folks - sorry for being late to reply here.
I couldn't get more in at the bottom - too much "railing" in there. I will experiment with versions without the clouds as well.