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    Same foggy morning as my previous post. Image captured at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED shot at 400mm (600mm FFE)
    1/400 F/5.6 Matrix Metering +2/3 EV ISO 180 AWB, camera supported by a monopod
    Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
    Cropped for composition and presentation
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    Hi Joseph,
    Love the pose and the perch as well. I like the way you included the full top of the perch in the ULC with room on the right for the bird to gaze into. Critical focus on the bird seems spot on. Nice image.
    Allen

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    The perch with the beautiful dewdrops and the spiderweb could be a stand alone image.
    I find myself wishing that the OOF flowers at the bottom were not there because they pull the eye away from the bird. You could clone 2 of the flowers/leaves away to " lighten" the weight.
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    Thank you Allan and Gail for viewing and commenting, very much appreciated.

    Gail, here is a repost with the lower oof flowers/leaves cloned out.
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