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    This past Saturday, late in the afternoon while walking back to the parking lot in a local wildlife preserve, we spotted this Eastern Phoebe just perched soaking up the sun. He was not at all skittish and offered up a nice pose or two in a fall setting. C&C welcome.

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    Nice perch and bird, Geoffrey. The blue spot at the top left should go.
    Also I could see a more close crop that would eliminate the blue spot for sure.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Karl Egressy View Post
    Nice perch and bird, Geoffrey. The blue spot at the top left should go.
    Also I could see a more close crop that would eliminate the blue spot for sure.
    Thanks Karl, and thank you for your suggestions. Here are 2 crop versions with blue spot removed.

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    Hi Geoffrey,
    It's a personal preference of course, but I like the bottom (tighter crop) better.
    It looks nicer without the blue spot whatever it was.

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    I like the subject posing among those ripe fruits. Not a scene I often see with phoebes. I too prefer the third option crop-wise. Only the processing needs to be tidied up: the lower right corner shows cloning marks, and the contour of the subject and berries look like they have a halo and softness. Did you mask those to blur the BG?

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    Thanks Daniel. I forgot to mention I did remove some distracting branches, and I did mask the subject, but could have been a bit more careful in the process.




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    The third repost is the best for me.
    Love the pop of color the berries provide.
    Beautiful light.
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    Thanks, Gail.




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