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    Default Catching the red-eye....

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    Hi Everyone,
    I took this image of a wood duck at the Slimbridge Wildfowl and Wetlands Trust in Gloucestershire, UK. I cropped the original image, added a little saturation and sharpening but nothing else.

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    Evaluative metering @ -1 stop
    Bright sunlight 3pm

    Look forward to your comments!!
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    Nicki ;)

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    I am pretty new to this forum as well, and although I like your image a lot I'm so new to this that I can't make any valid critiques to how the image itself could be improved, other that it seems a little under exposed. However, images can be up to 800x800 pixels, so why not show a larger version? Also, in my opinion, you need to compress the image a little more when you make your JPEG. Larger file sizes take longer to download, and there is no visible advantage (especially on the web) in not compressing the image a little more. 70kb might seem more appropriate for the size of your image. On the other hand a 800x600pixel image could turn out to be 144kb and that would be no problem. Just my two cents and welcome aboard!

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    Welcome Nicki. Nice shot and crop. I agree that you could present the image larger. A lower angle would have improved the image. The harsh light has burned the neck feathers out a bit and the face around the eye is way dark. Maybe you could try Shadow/Highlight in PS to fix some of this. You could do a quick mask on the face and lighten the area, but I think that the white of the neck may be gone. The advice that I have been given and try to follow is, shoot in the morning/evening/cloudy conditions and use the mid day harsh light times for computer time or nap time!

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    Hi Nicki,
    Welcome to the BPN family,
    No nits from me..all points covered by Dan...I like your Woody...:)

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    Hi All,
    Thanks for your comments. I wasn't sure that I understood the resizing issue but I've given it a go. I've applied the shadow/highlight tool but don't know how to do the quick mask:o. I'd love some more feedback on the resizing - especially if I've done it wrong!!
    Many thanks, regards to all,
    Nicki

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    In addition to what have been said, you could try to crop a bit more from the left to make it a square...like Hasselblad's 6x6 format.

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    Desmond, I like it - do you?!

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    Wow Nicki, that's a great improvement. I love that image in the water drop.

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    Great suggestions guys !!!! Love the end result !!! Can add you could move the eye so it intersects the upper third quadrant. A strong compositional anchor which seems to make a difference !!!

    Sizing wise we allow 800 kp and might as well take advantage. If you use save for web command it is possible to specify your target but if yo use save as then you can not.

    The quick mask is very easy. Basically you hit the letter "Q" to enter tne "B" to select the brush. Make sure the square on the left is set to black/white and the black in on top then all you do is paint over the area to be selected. When you finish hit the "Q" again to exit quick mask. To work on the area you painted inverting the selection is in order. Command/shitt/I or do it form the menu (select/inverse) The marching ants will show and you can make them invisible by itting Option+ H (alt on PC)

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    Cool to see the image progress, like the final!

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    Love the final - well done

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nicki Gwynn Jones View Post
    Desmond, I like it - do you?!
    Certainly, Nicki !

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