Morning Hawk

[Mitch Carucci]

remask & Detail.

[Hazel Grant]

I'm wondering, if the sun is behind the bird, what is lighting the bird?

[Dennis Bishop]

I agree with Hazel about the lighting consistency. Maybe darken the hawk a tad and lighten the background a little?

Although I like the horizontal and vertical positions of the sun and the hawk, I wonder if it might be good to either raise or lower the hawk so it's not on the same level as the sun.

[Cheryl Slechta]

Hi, Mitch, I agree with Dennis' assessment but I'm wanting just a little more room on the bottom which might help if you change the placement of the hawk.

[gary ellwein]

I agree with the inconsistency of the light angle. Try adding some canvas to the top and raise the hawk.

[Mitch Carucci]

Thanks Hazel, Dennis, Cheryl & Gary.

I guess this one needs a remake!