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    Shy Albatross coming in for landing in our berley trail.
    Photographed from a boat off Wollongong (NSW, Australia) two years ago. Approximately 35 km off shore on the continental shelf.

    1D, 70-200/2.8L IS + 1.4x set to 110mm.
    manual mode, evaluative metering
    ISO 640, f/5.6, 1/3200th
    hand held, no crop from RAW file.

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    Gorgeous Akos, love the flight angle and the dark depth of the sea, off sets the subject nicely.

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    Love the incoming pose and tack sharp too!
    Exposure is spot on, IQ excellent.
    Full frame too! Well done.
    Is it me or could this use a tiny sliver of clockwise rotation?
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    Akos:

    I love their bill and mascara! Very nice display, spread wings, tail and feet.

    Always hard to call rotation in this type of image, but if anything , I would think a bit couterclockwise.


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    I would think a bit couterclockwise.
    Would add more 'emphasis' certainly.

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    I like everything about it, Super nice how the bird stands out against the dark ocean. Perfectly exposed, track sharp and full frame...as we are used to from you. Well done, brother.

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    Lovely image, Akos. I echo all the previous comments. The only thing I would add is that the whites appear a little grey on my display. I think you could raise the whites which would set off the bird from the background even more. Thank you for sharing.
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    Aargh...I meant to type in CCW! Sorry about that!

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    Hi Akos, love the banking angle here with the full wingspread across the frame. Well exposed, sharp, and I do like the splash of yellow on the tip of the beak. Love the turbulent sea.

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    I think you could up the exposure a tad and I also think it needs rotation.
    An extremely cool bird to get a full frame flight shot of, Very nice....
    Dan Kearl

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    Thanks for the feedback everyone. I (begrudgingly) added canvas above and rotated CCW by 4.61 degrees. Don't ask HOW I ended up at that exact figure.
    Also, left it brighter during conversion by 1/3.

    Looks better me thinks.


    Thanks again.

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    Lovely details on this one Akos. Great pose and a lovely flight shot. I actually like the original best, its a matter of taste.

    Will

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    Hi Akos, the RP works far better for me, but the whites also look better, overall has good impact.

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