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    Hi Artie,

    Sorry, but I really don't think this - as presented - is up to your usual standards. The pose of the Tern is nice, with the cool banking, nice head angle, fanned tail and of course the fish, but there seems to be something off with the processing. There is quite a noticeable halo both above the head and on the far wing as if you've tried to recover lost detail, either through too big a crop or the original not being tack sharp.

    Mike

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    The fish is a plus, as are the full wing position and fanned tail. Halos noted, and could be easily corrected. The eye of the fish is sharp; something about the eye of the bird seems less so.

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    Wicked pose, and the fish prey is very cool - especially that it is facing the right way (head towards us). Perfect techs. I can see a sharpening halo that Mike mentions, but nothing major.

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    Artie:

    nice angled, banking turn captured, with fish, well exposed.

    I would be inclined to try a vertical crop with more space below. I think all the diagonal lines would work well with a vertical frame.

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    Sharp as a tack, well exposed, maybe a tad off the left side....
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    I love almost everything about this superb image Artie, the only thing I would have done is add some canvas to the bottom of the image.

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    For me, if possible, I'd leave equal amount of space below and above and move the bird
    to the left a touch. Or, a vertical as well like Randy suggested.
    A wonderful flight shot with superb details and great light Artie.
    Thanks for sharing!

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    Thanks all. I do see the halo above the bird's head. The optimized TIFF is quite sharp on the face and the eye so bad on me :) a
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