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Stu:
Fun to try new looks, for sure. Very strong graphic feel to it.
My reservations are two fold: I wish there was a bit more detail or ripples in the water to better define the water. As is, the silhouette seems to be floating in limbo, vaguely unsettling for me.
Even more than a standard reflection image, I think the reflection has to be very good to make it work its best. If the head was a bit clearer in the reflection, that would help.
Great to stretch and keep exploring new things.
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It is difficult to tell if this will work in my view. If the bird is sharp then yes. I think silhouettes are best when the subject is not entirely blacked out, that is to say, I like a hint of detail to help with the form. The ripple would have been better on body than on the bird's head. Hard to control such matter looking through a view finder IMHO. Nice work Stu.
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I see what Adrian meant about the ripple through the reflection's head, but I still love these types of shots very much.
Nice thinking and work Stu!
Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks a stack for the honest feedback everyone.
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Beautiful abstract, artsy image. I prefer the original composition with reflection to the tight crop.
TFS
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Hi Stu - Always great to spread our wings a bit and experiment (pun intended). I like the graphic nature to this, you could also use "Threshold" in PS for this. I prefer the op and think it is apparent that it is a reflection. It works for me.
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Rachel
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Great looking shot Stu. I like the OP but I might try to clean up the reflection a bit. Nice work.
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Hey Tony, your high key finish here does it more justice than the visible water. Thanks a stack.