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    Judy Lynn Malloch
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    This was taken last Sunday in the early morning as James made the first stop of the day. Spoonbils were coming and going and it was a real treat to see so many at one time .

    Nikon D3
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    1/2000, F6.3
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    All comments are much apopreciated.. Thanks !

    Sorry I hit submit too soon My apolgies.

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    This would be a real great image except for the OFF foreground. I would seriously consider cropping it out. Great detail and stop action. White on the breast seems a tad hot. Perhaps a pano crop would work well????

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    Beautiful young bird coming onto the sandbar Judy !!! You guys were close !!! Love it !!

    Do agree on cropping out most to the bar. I like the feather reproduction and find the colors/density fine. Early morning is difficult keeping some colors in check and have had to reduce the temp a bit !! Big Congrats on this one Judy !!!!

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    Hugh J McLaughlin
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    The spoonie is placed perfectly in the image. Rather than cropping out the sandbar, I might consider extending the water via a Quick Mask to cover up the sandbar. This would allow space for the virtual legs.

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    Very nice shot Judy. Nits have been mentioned. I'd actually crop out the bottom of the sandbar and leave the top where it borders the water alone. I think that helps to frame the image nicely.

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    Judy Lynn Malloch
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    Thanks Alfred, Joe. Hugh and Jay for your comments. I can dfinitely see the advantage of cropping the OOF sand. Sunday morning was so beautiful and I was just a bit carried away trying to capture an environmental image but with the sand OOF it did not portray what my eyes saw. Again many thanks . I appreciate it.

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    Freddy Franzella
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    Well done Judy Lynn! love that wing spread! it really stands out against that dark background!

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