Looks good Kieth. I think it could benefit from a tiny bit of sharpening on the head and removal of the little bits of vegetation intruding into the frame on the right. Regards, Ian.
A very interesting bird I haven't seen before. Great colours, details and a nice head angle looking back at us. I agree about a quick clone stamp over the small greenery on the mid right frame edge.
Looks great! About as perfect a look-back pose you can get. Lovely perch, the mosses add a lot to it too. I also like the vertical comp, colours, BG. Yes to eliminating the two bits peeking in at right edge, and I would also take care of the gap in extreme lower left corner by cropping up just enough to hide it (this would also better anchor the perch along the bottom).
Hi Keith, before reading Dan's comment, I too thought you have captured 'the perfect pose'. Well exposed on the yellows, and I like the layers of feather detail. I would do some gardening on the small piece of foliage on the RHS, and just a personal idea, I would come in from the right a bit.
One of your best small bird frames for sure! Beautiful in all aspects! Wow. Well done
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