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    Nikon D4
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    1/4000@f7.1
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    Thanks for taking a look and your comments on my last post.

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    Lovely and sticking colors Keith. I also like the HA and BG.

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    Great shot, nice sharpness and detail. Good pose and eye contact. The little piece of moss on rhs could just do with removing.

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    Looks good Kieth. I think it could benefit from a tiny bit of sharpening on the head and removal of the little bits of vegetation intruding into the frame on the right. Regards, Ian.

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    A very interesting bird I haven't seen before. Great colours, details and a nice head angle looking back at us. I agree about a quick clone stamp over the small greenery on the mid right frame edge.

    TFS
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    A favourite species from when I was an 8 year old. A superb capture here Keith. The colours are bang on.

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    Looks great! About as perfect a look-back pose you can get. Lovely perch, the mosses add a lot to it too. I also like the vertical comp, colours, BG. Yes to eliminating the two bits peeking in at right edge, and I would also take care of the gap in extreme lower left corner by cropping up just enough to hide it (this would also better anchor the perch along the bottom).

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    Thanks a lot guys, did look at taking that bit of moss out,Daniel that's a good point re anchoring the perch, thanks.

    Keith.

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    Loverly image Keith,the pose is superb,nice BG and details,agree with Daniels sugestions.TFS.

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    Hi Keith, before reading Dan's comment, I too thought you have captured 'the perfect pose'. Well exposed on the yellows, and I like the layers of feather detail. I would do some gardening on the small piece of foliage on the RHS, and just a personal idea, I would come in from the right a bit.

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    Thanks a lot guys,Stu did toy with the idea of a bit off the right but did think it might look a bit square .

    Cheers Keith.

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    One of your best small bird frames for sure! Beautiful in all aspects! Wow. Well done
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    Thanks David much appreciated.

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