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    Another image for the theme on the last day. This was shot vertical to include the clouds above.
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    Hi Sanjeev a good head on shot , nicely processed with a pleasing detail/tonal/color contrast .The water playing trunk is a nice bonus .
    I am not too fuzzed about the comp , the ratio land /sky/ subject is somehow not pleasing my eye , just my two cents . As you could try different ways of cropping if you wish ,i will not suggest a single one , for me there are numerous options for this .

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    Hi Sanjeev - another nice low pov from the boat and the pp looks good. I agree with Andreas that the comp isn't really doing it for me. I don't think the clouds add enough to justify all the negative space to get to them. Also I wish you had gone lower or higher so that the top edge of the slope wasn't intersecting the head even with the eye. That could just be me though.

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    Another memorable Chobe river moment, and it's all been said.
    I would crop tighter here Sanjeev...the sky doesn't hold enough interest...
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