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Hi Sanjeev a good head on shot , nicely processed with a pleasing detail/tonal/color contrast .The water playing trunk is a nice bonus .
I am not too fuzzed about the comp , the ratio land /sky/ subject is somehow not pleasing my eye , just my two cents . As you could try different ways of cropping if you wish ,i will not suggest a single one , for me there are numerous options for this .
TFS Andreas
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Hi Sanjeev - another nice low pov from the boat and the pp looks good. I agree with Andreas that the comp isn't really doing it for me. I don't think the clouds add enough to justify all the negative space to get to them. Also I wish you had gone lower or higher so that the top edge of the slope wasn't intersecting the head even with the eye. That could just be me though.
TFS,
Rachel
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Another memorable Chobe river moment, and it's all been said.
I would crop tighter here Sanjeev...the sky doesn't hold enough interest...
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