Hi Satish, lovely look back preening pose, and I like the colours on this fellow. Im finding your comp a bit 'top heavy' on the RHS. Either having a bit of foliage on the LHS to balance the comp, or you could have moved to your right to 'exclude' the foliage.
Lovely image with great sharpness on the bird. I like the more natural look of the RP, but might crop a little off the top and left. Great cleanup job on the OP, though! If I were to use that version, I'd just consider cropping some from the left. There is a lot of empty space there that doesn't balance the weight of the right side.