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    in morning golden light this small bird parched on the small bushes near to us ....

    During this shot the bird is too close to us , thats why could not manage to get full Dof cover here....


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    Lens: Canon 500mm +1.4 TC.
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    Last edited by Ritesh Nangare; 07-13-2015 at 08:40 AM.

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    Hi Ratish, nice look back pose and I really like the overall composition with lots of space to look into and I do think you need that leaf bottom RHC to anchor the stem. Dropping the blue will remove the cast in the top of the beak, likewise dropping the Magenta IMHO helps. If you up the Luminance of the Green it adds some more death to the foliage.

    What's the SS?

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    Really nice image you created here! The look back pose and framing is very well done. Excellent feather details. The dreamy creamy background and color really complement the bird. I would remove the "whatever it is" in the lower left corner. TFS!

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    It's the colour of the bird and the bg that makes this lovely image for me, it really is very ,very nice.


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    An unconventional composition that is very pleasing to my eye. Beautiful colors. I would sharpen the wing a bit less.

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    Unconventional horizontal composition that remarkably works quite well - neat room to add some text or poem at left. Nice light, and yes that head turn is perfect. Karen has noted the small object in lower left corner.

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    Hi Ritesh, lovely image. Bird and composition all work together. Thank you for sharing.
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    Very beautiful composition, cute subject and great HA. Very nice details too.

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    Excellent image. Great pose with nice head turn. Superb details, nice perch, BG nice composition.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    Hi Ratish, nice look back pose and I really like the overall composition with lots of space to look into and I do think you need that leaf bottom RHC to anchor the stem. Dropping the blue will remove the cast in the top of the beak, likewise dropping the Magenta IMHO helps. If you up the Luminance of the Green it adds some more death to the foliage.

    What's the SS?

    TFS
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    Thanks Steve, for your appreciation and suggestion , I defiantly going to do changes accordingly.....
    SS - Shutter Speed

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    Sweet BG colors and look back pose.

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