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Osprey

One of a family of Ospreys that put on a show for me on a gloomy morning at East Beach
Canon 5d3
500mm f4is
ISO 1600
1/2500th f4
Mike
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You've been hanging out at the same sort of spot I have! And getting the same white skies and cleaned fish, I see.
A very nice pose and wonderfully sharp -- that must be a great lens for them.
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Hey Mike Nice framing on the shot. A very nice view of the fish, wings and tail feathers. The eye is beautifully sharp. and good sharpness throughout. The osprey looks a little washed, may try reducing the exposure, while masking the black on the cheek as it looks plenty dark.
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Nice and sharp with plenty of detail, well done
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Its raining ospreys here on BPN LOL. I like the pose, eye contact and prey item. Well done.
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nice pose with the fish, good exposure and sharp details too. I wish the shooting angle was a bit less steep or at least the HA was a bit better. Having the bird eye level with the viewer, where possible, can dramatically increase its impact
TFS
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Mike:
Classic osprey with the head eaten off the fish. Nice wing spread, head free of merge, wing diagonals work the frame.
Agree about the washed out feel, almost as if a bit foggy. I would try moving the black slider a bit to the left, as I suspect the blacks are in the 30-40 range as posted.
Cheers
Randy
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You have nailed the bird well IMHO. The head is in line with the axis of the bird's body and the bird's right wing is nicely positioned. However the image has in my humble opinion an overall washed out appearance except for the area around the birds lores but it is only slight and is an easy fix. I think that there should be a little more red showing in the butchered part of the fish perhaps?
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Mike I take the points mentioned above but must say I would be very pleased if I had taken this.
Keith.
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First of all, thanks for all the comments and suggestions. Some have mentioned it looking a bit washed out, so I've tried again with a slightly different processing baring in mind the above comments. I'd be interested if people think this is an improvement or not
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Mike:
Overall the repost is better. Perhaps just a bit too much contrast on my monitor, but pretty close.
Cheers
Randy
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Originally Posted by
Randy Stout
Mike:
Overall the repost is better. Perhaps just a bit too much contrast on my monitor, but pretty close.
Cheers
Randy
Thanks Randy. I agree I might have gone a bit too far, all part of the learning process!
Mike
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Lovely shot Mike well caught, I would suggest an exposure about half way between the two posts.
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Originally Posted by
Jonathan Ashton
Lovely shot Mike well caught, I would suggest an exposure about half way between the two posts.

You've caught me on a rest day from work, so here's my third effort.
Thanks everyone
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Mike:
The last one works nicely.
Randy
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Good job Mike, The third post look very good to me. I also like how you reworked the blacks.
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The 3rd image is better IMHO
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That's better - I see detail in the birds legs and also on the fish, that's a belter!
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RP is def an improvement. Nice to see so many details under the wings.
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Third times a charm. Look at the difference from the OP. Nice capture with killer details. Well done
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Mike, this is really beautiful and I love the added punch when you increased the blacks. Really well done!
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Congrats on the IOTW. Final repost looks spot-on.