Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: Mallard Duck

  1. #1
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Location
    Lakeland, FL
    Posts
    7,514
    Threads
    2,039
    Thank You Posts

    Default Mallard Duck

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Here is one from the past that I recently worked up. The image was captured at Lake Mirror in the center of Lakeland, Florida. The tan/gold reflections are reflections from buildings about a city block away on the west side of the lake. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

    Nikon D7000
    Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED shot at 390mm (585mm FFE)
    1/1600 F/5.6 Matrix Metering + 1 EV ISO 1400 AWB
    Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
    Cropped for composition
    Joe Przybyla

    "Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams

    www.amazinglight.smugmug.com

  2. #2
    Avian Moderator Randy Stout's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    SW Michigan
    Posts
    14,112
    Threads
    820
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Joe:

    Excellent details, nice head turn, fine drops.

    From a comp standpoint, I would prefer a bit less below and more above.

    I had one outing in downtown Lakeland and enjoyed using the building reflections for a different color palette, as you have!

    Cheers

    Randy
    MY BPN ALBUMS

    "Tact is the art of making a point without making an enemy" Sir Isaac Newton

  3. Thanks Joseph Przybyla thanked for this post
  4. #3
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    3,065
    Threads
    1,300
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    nicely done joe when do you rest?

  5. Thanks Joseph Przybyla thanked for this post
  6. #4
    BPN Member Don Lacy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    SE Florida
    Posts
    3,566
    Threads
    348
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Hi Joe, Really nice color on the Mallard with plenty of detail, I would crop about half off the bottom if this were mine.
    Don Lacy
    You don't take a photograph, you make it - Ansel Adams
    There are no rules for good photographs, there are only good photographs - Ansel Adams
    http://www.witnessnature.net/
    https://500px.com/lacy

  7. Thanks Joseph Przybyla thanked for this post
  8. #5
    Lifetime Member David Salem's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Riverside, CA
    Posts
    6,664
    Threads
    276
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice pose , colors and details on this handsome drake and you caught the light right to light up the speculums very well. I would revese the comp ratio for top and bottom. Well done
    Come join me for a Custom Raptor Workshop starting this November 2019- January 2020.
    P.M. me to inquire on dates, pricing and availabilities. Thank You.
    www.davidsalemphotography.com

  9. Thanks Joseph Przybyla thanked for this post
  10. #6
    Lifetime Member Ákos Lumnitzer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2012
    Location
    Sydney, Australia
    Posts
    1,560
    Threads
    71
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Agree about comp, looks just a little bit off.
    I love the plumage details and the way you managed to capture the iridescence.
    Job well done, you need no rest!

  11. Thanks Joseph Przybyla thanked for this post
  12. #7
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    Stoney Point, Ontario, Canada
    Posts
    6,868
    Threads
    512
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I like the pose, details, exposure and agree with composition suggestions above. Nice image Joe.

  13. Thanks Joseph Przybyla thanked for this post
  14. #8
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Location
    Lakeland, FL
    Posts
    7,514
    Threads
    2,039
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. The crop was an easy fix.
    Joe Przybyla

    "Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams

    www.amazinglight.smugmug.com

  15. #9
    Avian Moderator Randy Stout's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    SW Michigan
    Posts
    14,112
    Threads
    820
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Joe:

    Nice repost, the comp looks much better.

    Randy
    MY BPN ALBUMS

    "Tact is the art of making a point without making an enemy" Sir Isaac Newton

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics