Nice, Dan. The bird is well exposed and sharp where it matters, and the background is excellent. You've positioned the bird well, allowing space for it to fly into and to look down. More DOF would have made this excellent photo even better. And I might crop a little off the top, perhaps half way from the top of the bird to the top of the frame.
Nice to see you back on Avian Dan!
I like the wing position and the good view of the tail feathers.
Great eye level view and really like the mottled BG.
I might increase the brightness or exposure just a bit to see if you can open up the blacks on the head.
I like your choice of comp but can see other options as well.
Gail
Hi Dan, great forward wing position, and I really like the curvature of the flight pose, starting at the wing tip of the right wing flowing all the way back to the tip of the tail. It pops nicely from the BG.