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Thread: Hazel Grouse

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    Tassilo Seeger
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    Hi together,

    the picture shows a Hazel Grouse (male) in an aviary in the NP Bayerischer Wald (Germany) - April 2007.
    Technical data: Canon Eos 1DMkII, Sigma 4,5/500 EX HSM, Iso 800, 1/250, f5.

    Thanks for looking

    Cheers
    Tassilo

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    Alfred Forns
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    I like it a lot !!! Bird well exposed and sharp Sure wish you did not have those oof areas at the base !!! I like the placement very much and the space given to the bird in frame !!!

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Nice details and BG. I agree regarding the OOF grass in the foreground and wish the sun would have been behind you. I would crop some off the top and apply some NR on the BG.

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    Tassilo Seeger
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    Thanks for your comments !

    I will try another crop and reduce the noise.
    I am still learning in postprocessing the pictures, so your opinions are very appreciated.

    And thanks again to Fabs for her Acronym List :)

    Cheers
    Tassilo

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    Tassilo Seeger
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    Here a new version:
    Crop some of the out-of-focus-area in front, using little noise reduction & other sharpening, and tried some removing of the white patches in the bottom left corner.
    Comments and critiques are very welcome
    Best regards
    Tassilo

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    The repost looks much better, I would give it a bit more space at the left, not much though.

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    Tassilo
    The repost is much better. It removes much of the OOF foreground, leaving a small patch that could probably be changed with the patch tool. I'd add a little room back to the left as well. What I like most about the crop is that it really showcases the bird and his detail. Well done.

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    DanWalters
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    Repost looks great. Agree about a little more space on the left. Like the soft light, really brings out the colors.

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