At Circle B Bar Reserve this morning I was capturing head shots of a juvenile Great Blue Heron when a dragonfly flew too close. I wish the head was turned slightly more towards me but I couldn't move any more right, so I had to capture what was given. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.
Nikon D7000
Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED shot at 400mm (600mm FFE)
1/2500 F/5.6 Matrix Metering 0 EV ISO 450
Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
Cropped for composition
Last edited by Joseph Przybyla; 05-03-2015 at 07:03 PM.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Fun! Don't think I have seen a GBH with a dragonfly before. Nice colors in bg, well exposed. Agree with self critique re: head angle, but his concentration on the butterfly is strong enough that its not a major issue for me.
Hi Joseph, the Heron isn't going to get fat on that morsel.
I think it needed more DoF, as these birds don't move quickly, I feel you could have afforded to crank up the ISO, gained more DoF and 'perhaps' a fraction less SS. If this is almost FF and not a big crop I would try to get a bit more detail & definition from the bill, primarily the lower half. May be a bit more sharpening too. HA is not ideal, slightly angled away as you said, but full appreciate the restraints you had.
Thanks everyone for your viewing, commenting and offer suggestions for improvement.
Steve, I checked the focus point and depth of field this morning. The active focus point was on the eye, the depth of field was 5 cm or 1.97 inches, enough for the slender head and dragonfly. The image as shown is almost full frame, I just took a little off the left and top to place the bird for composition. I worked more on the image this morning. I believe the repost here is better and addresses the improvements you mentioned.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Hi Joe, looks a bit saturated now to me, I prefer the OP I think, if you pull the green back a bit in Saturation it may offer a softer backdrop and not so competing with the subject, just a thought???? Re DoF, all I was thinking of was, with the beak angled away slightly, is 2 inches enough?
Hi Joseph, great portrait of this Heron, and love the concentrated stare of the Heron on his catch. I like your additional sharpening on the Heron, but would have left the BG as is.
Thanks everyone for your suggestions to improve the image. I went back to the original and worked it up from the beginning keeping your suggestions in mind to implement. I believe this image incorporates all of your suggestions and improvements. Thanks again everyone.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams