You've got a nice pose and good sharpness. The angle is a bit steep and the sky is oversaturated. The light is harsh, as you said, but that can be dealt with in PS. Here's a repost. I desaturated the sky, cleaned up the BG a little, minimized the shadow in the eye, and tried to tone down the harsh light. What do you think?
Wow, that's much better. I know how to desaturate the sky, but can you elaborate on how you toned down the harsh light, minimized the shadow, and cleaned up the BG? I'd like to learn how to do that.
Seems like you figured out how to do it by yourself Michael! I desaturated the sky. Then I tried to even out the exposure by doing a little burning and creating new layers from a couple of hot spots on the bird. I used the Multiply option for Blend, and changed the layer opacity to achieve the desire effect. I also removed some of the shadow in the iris of the bird's eye. Lastly I sampled the color of the sky and painted that color over the OOF areas at the bottom of the image.