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    Default Juvenile Great Blue Heron

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    I captured this image Friday morning at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Post processed in Lightroom 6 and Photoshop Elements 10
    Cropped for composition
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    Great positioning Joe and I love the BG with an indication of the vegetation.
    Good one. I reckon a bi of "punch" would help. Something simple like a gamma drop would do in my workflow.. Others may have more complcated methods
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    I too like the vegetation at bottom, especially the larger leaves. An OK flight pose, well balanced comp. A bit of bad luck with the yellowish spots in the background being aligned behind the heron's head.

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    John and Daniel, thank you for viewing, commenting and suggesting improvements to the image. I worked it up again paying attention to the improvements mentioned. Here is a repost.
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    Hi Joseph, decent flying pose (especially for herons) and nice habitat shot. I like the second post best, as it removes what was a it of a bdistracting BG behind the heron's head. TFS

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    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting and suggesting improvements, appreciated.
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