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    I was undecided whether to enter this photograph ...


    Many liked but I realize that is not the best quality.
    E 'was built at the beginning of the passion for photography with a very economical equipment: Canon 350D and Sigma 70/300 DG


    At the time I was photographing in RAW, JPG and only for processing I used an inexpensive program (Ulead Photo Express)


    The image was obtained by summing a series of shots.

    I tried to recover as much as possible with GIMP


    We welcome comments and feedbacks :)


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    I like the idea and the overall effect. Some of the frames don't seem to be on the same axis (twisted a little) and there seem to be some smudges and artifacts, mostly around the wing tips.

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    Hi Gianluca, Neat idea!

    I've moved your image to our "Out of the Box" forum which is the perfect place for an experimental image like this.

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    I'm glad to see your image in this forum. The text adds to it, but I very much like the angle rising from left to right and the spacing of the ibises getting closer toward the top. If GIMP gives a way to do it, I'd suggest some additional space at the top and maybe the right. Thanks for posting this.

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    Dennis Bishop Can you explain what you mean? thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gianluca Molina View Post
    Dennis Bishop Can you explain what you mean? thanks
    This is what I was thinking. (I'm sorry I lost part of your signature in the process.)

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    No problem for signature

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    Hi, Gianluca, welcome to OOTB I think this is very creative and I like the diagonal placement and the different wing placement of some of the shots - it flows nicely. This is a great place to learn different techniques and we are all eager to help you learn anything that you want. I hope we see more of your images here.
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    thanks Cheryl


    I hope so too but the time is always short .... unfortunately.


    However I have other interesting photographs that will insert short

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    Welcome GianLuca! I like the flight sequence and the birds placed on the diagonal. The repost with more room at the top works well. Hope to see more posts:)

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    Yes, the repost is good. like the angles. Looking forward to more from you.

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    The diagonal line of the birds is strong. A simple and effective image. Welcome to this forum.

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