Hi Marc - the dust devil adds a bit of interest. I like the way 4 of the 5 are looking at you and their placement in the frame. Too bad the 5th didn't cooperate but that's nature. Unfortunate about the harsh light but still a nice scene.
Wow love the dust devil.. I remember seeing lots of them in Kruger a few years back. Like pretty much everything about this one just wished you could have had some nicer light to work with.. You handled it well.. Nice depth to the image with the animals in the distance...
That beauty of a Dust Devil caught my eye too...Thinking a B/W might also work here, have you considered it? For the colour version I would probably look at adding a tad more vibrance here and there - maybe not "what you saw" - I agree, just what my eyes want to see:)
Love the wide spaces and those animals peppered everywhere - what an awesome place this is - lovely scene, thank you so much for sharing!