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BPN Member
Good call on DOF for this scene, Sanjeev.
I like that the elephant's head is not jutting over the top of the escarpment at the back (Oloololo Escarpment, I presume).
I would investigate a slight toning here, perhaps a hint of warmth/sepia? Personal taste though...
One thing that caught my eye that I would remove in the "print" version of this - an object BG left of the ele (game viewer?)...
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Lifetime Member
Hi Sanjeev - Nice view of the ele in the environment here. The b&w works. Morkel's suggestion of adding a little toning is a good one. I would burn the tusk on the left slightly. Nice detail on the ele hide. I think the dof is fine.
TFS,
Rachel
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Story Sequences Moderator and Wildlife Moderator
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Nice composition here... Not a big B&W fan but this works well! Great detail in the elephant!
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BPN Member
Hi Sanjeev i like the comp and the placement of the elephant in the frame . Overall i think OP is a bit flat , Gabriela has addressed this thing with her RP . Nice detail in the subject .
TFS Andreas
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Wildlife Moderator
Hi Sanjeev, would echo Andrea's feedback, keep experimenting and looking at other 'mediums', worth persevering.
TFS
Steve