Hi Scott agree with your light assestment but it is what it is !!!!!
Remember the first tow rules for flight photography #1 Pan faster ... #2 Pan faster !!!!! Would add some canvas for this image which will make it look great. You did well with the exposure might tone down the head just a bit and lighten the under wing. With the MK3 you should have other poses?
When trying for an image like this one try giving yourself some room to play with since you know the bird will be larger in frame in a hurry !!! ..... remember the size limits 800 on the long side !!!!
I've definitely got to work on my tracking skills to keep the subject in frame. For this shot, I was in a kayak, and the waves from a passing speedboat moved me closer to the subject than I preferred. I had the 1.4x on my 70-200 because I needed the reach initially, but for this shot I'm zoomed all the way out and still too close.
If anyone has pointers on how to add canvas to the right, I'd appreciate it. Sounds like major surgery in Photoshop that is beyond my current skill level.
I do have a few more shots right before/after this one, but I felt as though this one had he best balance of framing/action. I'll post small versions of a few of the others below - maybe others disagree on my selection? I find often times that half the battle is choosing which shot to select as the 'best'
(first shot in the sequence)
(second shot in the sequence - immediately preceding the original image)
Most of these have the wings clipped to some degree.I've heard that there are techniques to repair this, but again, I feel as though this is out of my league in photoshop (although I'd love to learn!)
Big welcome Scott and congratulations on the wonderful action you captured in this image. The above suggestions have covered it all but I look forward to seeing your future posts. Many thanks for sharing.
Dramatic series, Scott. I agree on working a bit more on the shadows/highlights. I also second Robert O'Toole's Quik Mask CD, which I just purchased. You'll fix that clipped wing in no time.