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    thanks for looking

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    Hi Sasan
    This is a nice shot of buzzard with great detail and good exposure. I think it could be better if you put the bird in the left side of the frame and leave much more free space in the right, because of the bird's head direction.I also prefer a little more crop from the top and more space in bottom. Something like this:

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    Light is not perfect, perhaps because of a cloudy day. Otherwise I love your photo.
    Thanks for sharing
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    I like the head angle and the look back, good details. I would put more space on the right where he is looking as opposed to the left (the empty space there doesn't add much). I like the BG but not the pile of mud ( another reason for moving the bird to the left) and also wish we could see the talons a bit better.

    the image has a red cast to my eye. Have you calibrated your screen?

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    Quote Originally Posted by arash_hazeghi View Post
    I like the head angle and the look back, good details. I would put more space on the right where he is looking as opposed to the left (the empty space there doesn't add much). I like the BG but not the pile of mud ( another reason for moving the bird to the left) and also wish we could see the talons a bit better.

    the image has a red cast to my eye. Have you calibrated your screen?

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    Hi dear Arash .....my display is Retina (apple) I do not calibrated or not....I'll check again.....Sorry if my English is not good

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    thaknks dear Behin......You're right, and it was definitely better

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    Quote Originally Posted by sasan nejadi View Post
    Hi dear Arash .....my display is Retina (apple) I do not calibrated or not....I'll check again.....Sorry if my English is not good
    Check out this article, it's a good starting point. All screens need calibration, laptop screens are not ideal for critical image processing, but after calibration they can give you a better result than OOTB

    http://arihazeghiphotography.com/blo...n-photography/

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    Hi Sasan, great look back pose, and this angle gives us a great view of that sharp beak. The overall feather detail looks good, in whats seems like soft light. I agree in your OP to have more space on the right, and cropping away from the LHS.

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    Hi Sasan,Excellent head angle and the look back pose.very good detail.
    Behin composition is Good.

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    Beautiful shot! I like the pose here. Agree with the above comments re. the color cast. I like the composition in Behin's RP. TFS

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