Nice portrait and soft light. I would give it a bit more room and remove the sheen from the bill. The BG looks a bit dark and noisy and doesn't allow for much separation with the bill.
The whites are drop dead on and the yellows are great. I can live with the dark areas as I can still see the bill and I am sure that it will print fine. Is this the area that you mentioned that is a drop of gas away from Hills Beach