Hi Jonathan,
Really nice pose and the feather detail looks great. Agree with Lyle's comments above - more space on the sides and the beak position could be better. Still a very nice image well captured.
I don't mind the tight composition too much as it concentrates my eyes to the Nice feather details of the underwing and belly. I too wish the bill had not intersected with the wing but it's not too bad. Nice exposure.
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