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    this was an attempt...but, for me, no works

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    This is quite amazing -- good seeing! The eye is wonderful!

    Scroll up to just hide the blue shape in the upper left and see what you think -- it removes some distracting areas and you can still see what the picture is about.

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    Very artsy feel. I think Diane's suggestion is quite good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by John Hackney View Post
    Very artsy feel. I think Diane's suggestion is quite good.
    So is better ?

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    Yes. I think so.

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    Cropping so much from the top placed the white structure on the beak too close to the top edge, and it looks like you used content-aware fill, which did a clumsy job. My idea was to simplify the edges. This is where I was thinking to crop the top. You had a good idea to also work on the right edge, but adding to the details there didn't work very well. I did a small crop from the right, which made it easy to clone out the remaining distracting shapes there.

    What do you think?

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    Hello Diane
    it is fine...also if I tried to reduce the clone work..

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