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Hi Rachel quite difficult to get a decent tight portrait with a slight head turn / side profile . You did somehow well , but i do think it is bit tight on RHS . I do like the colors / clarity and sharpness. For me the overall image is a bit dull in the tones and a bit dark from luminosity POV , i would open up the brightness and add some mid tone punch , just my thoughts .
You achieved very nice detail in the HL and shadows
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TFS Andreas
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Nice framing Rachel. I often tend to not go for these in the field and they can come out so nicely (in the field that cutting off of the trunk keeps bugging me haha).
I agree with Andreas on shifting the framing more to the RHS in hindsight.
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Rachel, you have portrayed great detail and textures in this image. Particularly the skin and tusks. I like the long eye lashes & over all comp though I agree a slight more room wouldn't be bad either. TFS. Sanjeev
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Amazing IQ and texture. It looks like I can touch and feel the Elephant. Good colour as well as a pleasing portrait.
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Thanks Gentlemen. I too would like just a sliver more room by the tusk.
Rachel
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Thanks Gabriela and Steve. Steve - this is ff. I agree a touch more on the right but don't have it.
Thanks again,
Rachel