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    Ovidiu:

    Striking image with interesting/detailed perch, well posed bird, and a simple in some ways, but very lively background. Almost a sense of movement/panning effect, although I know it was stationary. The diagonals give a sense of movement as well.

    Its hard to explain why, but the background to me slightly overpowers the bird. I could see a little more cropping to rebalance the bird/bg ratio, or perhaps even lowering the luminosity and contrast of the bg a tiny bit.

    This is probably just my personal reaction, and others will feel differently I am sure.

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    Really nice image.
    I agree with Randy's critique 90%.
    I personally like the BG as is- really looks like you were panning and gives a great sense of motion.
    Sweet perch,
    Gail

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    Definitely a neat background, is it a print behind the bird?

    I might add just a tad of room below if it's available.

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    Thanks for comments.
    BG is not a print. As in the previous two posts BG is a garden Miscanthus sinensis. I tried to get in the frame differents parts of it, just stems and leaves or the middle-top part including feather like seedheads. Different shades of browns are due different light and due the stems were wet/dry.

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    Very clever use of the b/g good bit of thinking, neat sharp bird and a nice perch.

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    Nice pose and a lovely perch. The BG speaks for itself.

    The colours look a little pale compared to my local Great tits, particularly the yellows on the breast. Maybe worth adding a little more vibrance to that area and desaturating the blues might give a richer black on the head

    Mike

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