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    Default Ashy-crowned Sparrow Lark, male.

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    Image was created in Dec,2014. Basic editing, cropped for composition and NR applied to BG.

    ISO :200, 1/800,@5.6.Manual.550D,100-400.

    Thanks for viewing ,appreciation, comments and critiques.
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    Hi Satish. Love the multi-colored background, and the nice pose. Beautiful comp. I don't know the bird, but I'm wondering if a touch more contrast, or a few points of black added to the neutrals, would give him a little more pop.

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    I like the perch, composition and BG. I agree with Bill that it needs a little more contrast. Nice image Satish.

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    Thank you Bill Sir and Jim for the feed back. Here is the re post as suggested by you.

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    Looks better to my eye. Well done.

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    I am sorry Bill Sir, I Have edited jpg file ,hence there is artifact in the BG. Here is correct image.
    Moderator can you help me removing image in pan #4.
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    The repost really does pop Satish,Bills advice really as paid off. Is it a common Sparrow with you?

    Keith.

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    Yes, the repost looks better on my laptop. Nice looking bird, lovely BG. Well done Satish

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    Hi Satish,
    The colorful BG really helps showcase this rather plain bird.
    I like the repost but I would have added more contrast to the bird only and not the BG.
    Nice IQ and pose and I like the diagonal line created by the perch,
    Gail

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    Thank you all once again for your comments.

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    Satish.

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