Sharp on the eye and great detail. Looks a bit dark overall. It would have been tough to do but having the eye in the urc with the whole bill included might have been the ticket...
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I like how you incorporated a diagonal in this tight image but agree with Artie that moving eye up and right and getting the bill in would have been the ideal composition.