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    Avian Florida Seascape

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    remask, impression & flood.

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    Very nice -- I like the BG treatment, crop and the vignette. Wondering how a version would look with the blue on the bird toned down a little? Might look a little less "digitally remastered." Not that there's anything wrong with that but it might play the trick of "Is this real? Did he do something -- or not?"

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    Lovely & serene. Very nice pose and position of the tern, but Diane does have a good point about the blue-ness on it. And maybe a touch more light on just the tops of the vegetation? That would pick up the light already on the tern and continue it throughout the image.

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    Good suggestions above, Mitch. This looks like a painting
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    Very serene, some interesting suggestions noted above. Might be worth trying some. I really like the BG and the vignette to draw your eye in.

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    I had the same reactions about toning down the blue on the bird and making the lighting consistent. The background is beautiful, and I like the way you composed the image.

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